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#1 Cdr Maddie Allen

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Posted Star Date 22009.11 @ 12:41 (12:41 PM)

== Holodeck 09 ==


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#2 Cdr Maddie Allen

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Posted Star Date 22009.11 @ 13:10 (01:10 PM)

== Welcome to your holodeck Cadet Price,

 

Read the following information carefully, because it has a fair amount of important information for you.  If you have any questions or difficulties at any time, please contact one of the following people for assistance.  We’d be glad to help you out.

 

Captain Esperenson: Esperenson@fed-space.com

Commander Jasal: sforcom@fed-space.net

Commander Allen: allen@fed-space.com

 

Remember during your time at the Academy that people who have responsibilities such as school, jobs, and family, maintain Federation Space. There are times when we all have to wait longer than we’d like for a reply to a post or a question. Patience and treating each other with respect and dignity are two things that are absolutely required of all members.

 

On the flip side, the Constitution states that players need to post at least twice a week.  If you find you are unable to keep up due to something coming up in real life responsibilities or you’re just going to be on holiday, please let one of the Admins know.  You will be granted a leave of absence for the length of time you think you’ll be away.  If you don’t let us know and you suddenly disappear, this could end up with you being considered AWOL and eventually removed from the active cadet roster.

 

With that said, let’s get to your character’s bio!

 

Please begin by posting your bio using the template found below. Once posted, your bio will be reviewed by an evaluations representative. They will post comments for you and suggest any adjustments your bio might require.  Once they approve your bio, you will be assigned an instructor and your adventure will begin!

 

Federation Space is a written RPG. With that said, we ask that you try to pay attention to spelling and grammar in your posts.  Posts that are properly formatted are easier and more enjoyable for everyone to read. I strongly recommend you run your bio and any posts you make through a spell check before posting them.

 

A few things to keep in mind while writing your bio.  First, certain species are not playable.  Click here for a catalog of playable races. Second, a great resource when it comes to filling out the bio form is the Character Development page. Lastly, our Star Fleet Majors and Minors.  This is a great page to understand the Academy curriculum.  One last thing, we would like you to take time to read and understand our site's canon page.  It's important for you understand what ‘Trek’ related info is on our site.
 

Again, if you have any questions, please feel free to ask!  Hope to see you playing soon and have fun!

 

== Physical Description ==

Name:

Species:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Weight:

Build/Body Type:

Complexion:

Hair Color:

Hair Style:

Eye Color:

Voice:

Off-Duty Clothing Taste:

Distinguishing Features:

 

== Personal History ==

Date of Birth:

Place of Birth:

Marital Status:

Siblings Name & Ages:

Mother's Name:

Father's Name:

Parent's Status:

Pets:

Best Friend:

Personal History:

== Personality ==

Academy Majors:

Academy Minors:

Hobbies & Past-Times:

Short-Term Goals:

Long-Term Goals:

Personality:

Sense of Humor:

Phobias:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Pet Peeves/Gripes:

Bad Habits / Vices:

Achievements:

Disappointments:

Illnesses:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Fears:

Prejudices:

 

== Questions ==

Most Painful Experience:

Best Time:

Most Crucial Experience:

Role Model:

Referrer / How you found Fed Space (If 'Google' or 'Search Engine' please specify the search engine and the term searched for):

 

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#3 Cdt Jackson Price

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Posted Star Date 22009.12 @ 02:57 (02:57 AM)

==Physical Description ==

Name: Jackson Price

Species: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 18 years old

Height: 170 centimeters

Weight: 80 kilograms

Build/Body Type: Athletic

Complexion: Fair

Hair Color: Jet Black

Hair Style: Ivy League

Eye Color: Sky Blue

Voice: Soothing

Off-Duty Clothing Taste: Jackson prefers to wear tight jeans in either light colors or occasionally dark colors. For shirts he usually wears graphic t-shirts in dark colors. Jackson also wear either a black leather jacket or cotton jackets. For shoes he usually wears black or brown boots/shoes. As for accessories he wears a watch on his left arm, a plain silver ring on his right ring finger, a silver cross necklace, and a black braided leather bracelet.

Distinguishing Features: N/A

 

== Personal History ==

Date of Birth: 10/16/2002

Place of Birth: Pine Springs, Montana 

Marital Status: Single

Siblings Name & Ages: Amber Price 18 years old twin sister. Eric Price 15 years old Younger Brother

Mother's Name: Brook Price 36 years old former EMT, currently a nurse

Father's Name: Tarren Price 38 years old police detective

Parent's Status: Married

Pets: None

Best Friend: Many 

Personal History: Jackson grew up in a tiny town in the middle of the forest of Montana called Pine Springs. Along with his twin sister Amber, Jackson life was full of many adventures and exploration around in the forest surrounding his family farm. Jackson attended the local elementary and high school. Being at the top of his class along with his sister he had high grades, and was also a great soccer and baseball player. Leading both his elementary and high school teams to a couple state championships.  Jackson also grew up with a younger brother that he loved to hang out and teach him how to play sports, while also reminding him sports is not more important  than his education. Jackson look up to both his parents his dad was with the local police departments serving the department for 8 years before having Jackson and Amber, and another 11 before have Eric his younger brother. His mother was EMT for the fire department for four years, then began to study as a nurse in her 5 year as EMT, having Jackson and Amber her first year as a nurse, Eric was born 4 years into her nursing carrier.

 

While in high school Jackson study many things, but the one thing that interested was anything that involved or improved his understanding of medicine. During his 4 year in high, Jackson dreamed of a bigger things, he wanted to adventure far from the small town he grew up in. One day during a job fair Jackson stumbled in a recruiter for Star Trek Academy, sparking his interest he approached the recruiter. As he began talking to the recruiter, he finally found  out what he wanted to do with his life after high school. Information in hand he went home to tell his plan about what he heard; his parents agreed that it would be a great opportunity for him. Excited about this information  he contacted the recruiter and signed up for Star Trek Academy. Months later Jackson was graduating high school along with his twin sister, days after graduation he packed his bags ready to leave Pine Springs, for bigger adventures at Star Trek Academy.

 

== Personality ==

Academy Majors: Medical Major (Nursing Track)

Academy Minors: Surgical Assistant, and Pharmacology

Hobbies & Past-Times: One of Jacksons favorite things to do you is to explore the city, the sites, the smells, and sounds is a enjoyable experience for him. Another favorite things is sitting in nice comfy army chair near a roaring fireplace, surround with books in nice oak paneled library

Short-Term Goals: Finish attending Star Fleet Academy in order to pursuit his goals in become a nurse.

Long-Term Goals: To serve Star Fleet and serve aboard multiple ships in order to provide the best medical services Star Fleet can provide to its members and nonmembers.

Personality: : Jackson is an outgoing, kindhearted, caring, witty, curious, adventurous, and knowledgably guy.

Sense of Humor: Jackson sense of humor is one of a sarcastic and has a somewhat dirty nature

Phobias: Jackson has no phobias.

Likes: Jackson like many things, some of the things he loves is caring for the people around  him, and being an approachable person to come and talk to.

Dislikes: The one thing Jackson hate is people that are dishonest to him, people that would do anything to get their own, a person that betrays or turns easily on their friend and family

Pet Peeves/Gripes: : Jackson has many pet peeves some of his pet peeves are people that do not clean up after themselves, people who steal or take credit whit out his knowledge, etc.

Bad Habits / Vices: Jackson is a person that is easily distracted if the subject or things he is doing dose not interest him

Achievements: N/A

Disappointments: N/A

Illnesses: N/A

Strengths: Jackson is an adventurous and knowledgeable person.

Weaknesses: Jackson is easily distracted if the things he is doing dose not interest him or bores him easily.

Fears: Jackson one fear is not being capable enough to reach and obtain his future goals of becoming a Star Fleet Medical Officer.

Prejudices: Jackson tries to be open to more people, not just to friends and family members.

 

== Questions ==

Most Painful Experience: : Leaving his home of Pine Springs, leaving back the many memories, friends, and family he has back home.

Best Time: Being accepted into Star Fleet Academy during his high school senior year.
Most Crucial Experience: N/A

Role Model: N/A

Referrer: Googled for Star Trek RPGS.


Edited by Cdt Jackson Price, Star Date 22009.12 @ 02:58 (02:58 AM).

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#4 Cdr Carrs Jasal

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Posted Star Date 22009.16 @ 12:19 (12:19 PM)

==Greetings Cadet, I am Commander Carrs and I'll be assisting with your bio!

 

Overall, a great start! There are a few changes we'll need to make before progressing.

 

First up: Age. Your character will be graduating Star Fleet Academy when you finish your training here, which would make him 22/23 years of age rather than 18.

Second: I'd like to see a little more for your Personal History; usually we aim for three or four good-length paragraphs here to flesh out the character's background.

 

If you have any questions, please let me know!==


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#5 Cdt Jackson Price

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Posted Star Date 22009.17 @ 07:03 (07:03 AM)

==Physical Description ==

Name: Jackson Price

Species: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 22  years old

Height: 170 centimeters

Weight: 80 kilograms

Build/Body Type: Athletic

Complexion: Fair

Hair Color: Jet Black

Hair Style: Ivy League

Eye Color: Sky Blue

Voice: Soothing

Off-Duty Clothing Taste: Jackson prefers to wear tight jeans in either light colors or occasionally dark colors. For shirts he usually wears graphic t-shirts in dark colors. Jackson also wear either a black leather jacket or cotton jackets. For shoes he usually wears black or brown boots/shoes. As for accessories he wears a watch on his left arm, a plain silver ring on his right ring finger, a silver cross necklace, and a black braided leather bracelet.

Distinguishing Features: N/A

 

== Personal History ==

Date of Birth: 10/16/2002

Place of Birth: Pine Springs, Montana 

Marital Status: Single

Siblings Name & Ages: Amber Price 22 years old twin sister. Eric Price 18 years old Younger Brother

Mother's Name: Brook Price 39 years old former EMT, currently a nurse

Father's Name: Tarren Price 41 years old police detective

Parent's Status: Married

Pets: None

Best Friend: Many 

Personal History: Jackson grew up in a tiny town in the middle of the forest of Montana called Pine Springs. Along with his twin sister Amber, Jackson life was full of many adventures and exploration around in the forest surrounding his family farm. Jackson attended the local elementary and high school. Being at the top of his class along with his sister he had high grades, and was also a great soccer and baseball player. Leading both his elementary and high school teams to a couple state championships.  Jackson also grew up with a younger brother that he loved to hang out and teach him how to play sports, while also reminding him sports is not more important  than his education. Jackson look up to both his parents his dad was with the local police departments serving the department for 8 years before having Jackson and Amber, and another 11 before have Eric his younger brother. His mother was EMT for the fire department for four years, then began to study as a nurse in her 5 year as EMT, having Jackson and Amber her first year as a nurse, Eric was born 4 years into her nursing carrier.

 

Jackson childhood was one of constant adventure, living in a small town surround by tree, mountains, and lakes made Jackson a pretty adventurous kid. Growing up alongside his twins sister Amber, Jackson was always in constant compotation with her. Make him a smart and witty young boy while attending elementary school. When Jackson was 4 years old, he became an older brother, to his young and mischievous young brother Eric. Throughout elementary Jackson was a smart acyclic, thinking he knew almost anything the world had to offer.  Thinking to himself, that there was nothing else to explore in his small town. He dreamed of bigger adventures away from his family, friend, and the small town of Pine Springs.

 

During high school Jackson study many things, but the one thing that interested was anything that involved or improved his understanding of medicine. During his 4th year in high, Jackson began to dream of a bigger things again, he wanted an adventure far from the small town he grew up in. One day during a job fair Jackson stumbled in a recruiter for Star Trek Academy, sparking his interest he approached the recruiter. As he began talking to the recruiter, he finally found  out what he wanted to do with his life after high school. Information in hand he went home to tell his plan about what he heard; his parents agreed that it would be a great opportunity for him. Excited about this information  he contacted the recruiter and signed up for Star Trek Academy. Months later Jackson was graduating high school along with his twin sister, days after graduation he packed his bags ready to leave Pine Springs, for bigger adventures at Star Trek Academy.

 

== Personality ==

Academy Majors: Medical Major (Nursing Track)

Academy Minors: Surgical Assistant, and Pharmacology

Hobbies & Past-Times: One of Jacksons favorite things to do you is to explore the city, the sites, the smells, and sounds is a enjoyable experience for him. Another favorite things is sitting in nice comfy army chair near a roaring fireplace, surround with books in nice oak paneled library

Short-Term Goals: Finish attending Star Fleet Academy in order to pursuit his goals in become a nurse.

Long-Term Goals: To serve Star Fleet and serve aboard multiple ships in order to provide the best medical services Star Fleet can provide to its members and nonmembers.

Personality: : Jackson is an outgoing, kindhearted, caring, witty, curious, adventurous, and knowledgably guy.

Sense of Humor: Jackson sense of humor is one of a sarcastic and has a somewhat dirty nature

Phobias: Jackson has no phobias.

Likes: Jackson like many things, some of the things he loves is caring for the people around  him, and being an approachable person to come and talk to.

Dislikes: The one thing Jackson hate is people that are dishonest to him, people that would do anything to get their own, a person that betrays or turns easily on their friend and family

Pet Peeves/Gripes: : Jackson has many pet peeves some of his pet peeves are people that do not clean up after themselves, people who steal or take credit whit out his knowledge, etc.

Bad Habits / Vices: Jackson is a person that is easily distracted if the subject or things he is doing dose not interest him

Achievements: N/A

Disappointments: N/A

Illnesses: N/A

Strengths: Jackson is an adventurous and knowledgeable person.

Weaknesses: Jackson is easily distracted if the things he is doing dose not interest him or bores him easily.

Fears: Jackson one fear is not being capable enough to reach and obtain his future goals of becoming a Star Fleet Medical Officer.

Prejudices: Jackson tries to be open to more people, not just to friends and family members.

 

== Questions ==

Most Painful Experience: : Leaving his home of Pine Springs, leaving back the many memories, friends, and family he has back home.

Best Time: Being accepted into Star Fleet Academy during his high school senior year.
Most Crucial Experience: N/A

Role Model: N/A

Referrer: Googled for Star Trek RPGS.


Edited by Cdt Jackson Price, Star Date 22009.17 @ 07:04 (07:04 AM).

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#6 Cdr Carrs Jasal

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Posted Star Date 22009.21 @ 12:06 (12:06 PM)

==Greetings Cadet, I am Commander Carrs and I will be assisting with your bio!

 

Overall, excellent start! There's one or two modifications we need to make before we continue, both in the Personal History section.

 

1) You refer to Star Trek Academy multiple times, this should be Star Fleet Academy.

2) I'd like to see a paragraph about his time at the Academy, as once you're done here you'll have graduated, and having more "experiences" to refer back to will flesh out your character a little more.

 

Once you've done that, we can continue!==


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#7 Cdt Jackson Price

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Posted Star Date 22009.22 @ 05:35 (05:35 AM)

Personal History: Jackson grew up in a tiny town in the middle of the forest of Montana called Pine Springs. Along with his twin sister Amber, Jackson life was full of many adventures and exploration around in the forest surrounding his family farm. Jackson attended the local elementary and high school. Being at the top of his class along with his sister he had high grades, and was also a great soccer and baseball player. Leading both his elementary and high school teams to a couple state championships.  Jackson also grew up with a younger brother that he loved to hang out and teach him how to play sports, while also reminding him sports is not more important  than his education. Jackson look up to both his parents his dad was with the local police departments serving the department for 8 years before having Jackson and Amber, and another 11 before have Eric his younger brother. His mother was EMT for the fire department for four years, then began to study as a nurse in her 5 year as EMT, having Jackson and Amber her first year as a nurse, Eric was born 4 years into her nursing carrier.

 

Jackson childhood was one of constant adventure, living in a small town surround by tree, mountains, and lakes made Jackson a pretty adventurous kid. Growing up alongside his twins sister Amber, Jackson was always in constant compotation with her. Make him a smart and witty young boy while attending elementary school. When Jackson was 4 years old, he became an older brother, to his young and mischievous young brother Eric. Throughout elementary Jackson was a smart acyclic, thinking he knew almost anything the world had to offer.  Thinking to himself, that there was nothing else to explore in his small town. He dreamed of bigger adventures away from his family, friend, and the small town of Pine Springs.

 

During high school Jackson study many things, but the one thing that interested was anything that involved or improved his understanding of medicine. During his 4th year in high, Jackson began to dream of a bigger things again, he wanted an adventure far from the small town he grew up in. One day during a job fair Jackson stumbled in a recruiter for Star Fleet Academy, sparking his interest he approached the recruiter. As he began talking to the recruiter, he finally found  out what he wanted to do with his life after high school. Information in hand he went home to tell his plan about what he heard; his parents agreed that it would be a great opportunity for him. Excited about this information  he contacted the recruiter and signed up for Star Fleet Academy. Months later Jackson was graduating high school along with his twin sister, days after graduation he packed his bags ready to leave Pine Springs, for bigger adventures at Star Fleet Academy.

 

For the first time in life, after arriving at Star Fleet Academy: Jackson was awestruck at the size and scale of the school. He had never seen anything this big his life, coming from a small town he Montana he never building for this size excised. During Jackson’s first year Star Fleet Academy, he went straight to studying and preparing for the following three years to come at Star Fleet Academy. Jackson took all the classes that related to main course of medicine, expanding his knowledge he gained during high school. Beside just learning about human antonym, Jackson also had to learn about the many other different species within Star Fleet. While in his second years at Star Trek he would become good friends with a Tactical Cadet Tarren Woods in which he shared his room with. On nights where they weren’t studding, reading school material, or stressing out about school. They would spend their nights talking, eating, and playing videos games. As his third year began, Jackson’s relationship with Tarren become more and more of less of a best friend; but that of a boyfriend. Jackson third year was full of studding and training for his final exams coming up in his fourth year. As well during his third year Tarren help improve his combat skills, and weapons training, while Tarren was teaching Jackson. Jackson returned the favor helping him also improve his medical knowledge. In his fourth year Jackson was ready to leave Star Fleet Academy, and begin to provide aid to his fellow crew men, and Federation officers, while also exploring the vast Federation space.  Ready to face the 


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