HD02 - Medical Cadet Tes Th'etellis

[Amelina Whittaker]

== Welcome to your holodeck, Cadet Th'etellis 

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== Tag Th'etellis =

[Tes Th’etellis]

Physical Description ==
Name: Tes Th’etellis
Species: Andorian
Gender: Thaan
Age: 24
Height: 6” 6’
Weight: 187
Build/Body Type: Lanky, thin
Complexion: Pocked, Light Blue
Hair Color: Alabaster White
Hair Style: Slicked back, medium length
Eye Color: Steel Blue
Voice: Faltering, somewhat lilted
Off-Duty Clothing Taste: Casual shirt + jeans, occasionally comfortable shapeless dresses
Distinguishing Features: Hooked nose, slightly cleft lip, genetic dark circles around his eyes
 
== Personal History ==
Date of Birth: March 5
Place of Birth: Voral, Andoria 
Marital Status: Single
Siblings Name & Ages: None
Shen Mother's Name: Thyma Sh’etellis
Zhen Mother’s Name: Apittaa Zh’etellis
Chan Father's Name: Ethar Ch’etellis
Thaan Father’s Name: Shrevian Th’etellis 
Parent's Status: Married
Pets: N/A
Best Friend: Cadet Santtu Uljas, a year below Tes, a Finnish Starfleet communications cadet
Personal History:
Tes was born on the continent of Voral on the planet of Andoria to a family of well-known local merchants who had been wanting a child for a long time. His childhood could be described as good, mostly uneventful (in the realm of bad events), though he was often doted on by his Shen mother especially. When he was about eight years old, his family became aware of his extreme curiosity and his high intellect. Excited by this and wanting their child to be successful, they immediately began planning to get Tes into Starfleet. 

This didn’t upset Tes; he revered Starfleet officers, especially Starfleet doctors. He did his very best to get into the Academy, and his parents, though with the best intentions, pushed him along. Tes burned out fast, and his Shen mother was the first to stop pushing and start helping. The family exhausted nearly every resource they had to help Tes through his burnout. Finally, though tired and exhausted, he got himself into Starfleet Academy.

While at the Academy, Tes mostly kept to himself, but his reserved nature caused him to connect with another cadet: Santtu Uljas. Uljas was severely extroverted and often dragged Tes along with him to social events, introducing him (to Tes’ horror) to everyone there. Tes would begrudgingly participate in these events, though he would often purposely avoid conversations. 

== Personality ==
Academy Majors: Medical
Academy Minors: Multi-species Medicine, Xenobiology
Hobbies & Past-Times: Music Composition, Reading Medical Articles
Short-Term Goals: Finishing his current music piece
Long-Term Goals: Leave a strong, positive legacy and inspire others once he’s dead
Personality: Nervous, reserved, 
Sense of Humor: Self-deprecating 
Phobias: Maieusiophobia
Likes: Music, the performing arts, civil conversation (especially with just one or two people)
Dislikes: Large groups of people, heated debate, confrontation
Pet Peeves/Gripes: People with a superiority complex, People who interrupt others
Bad Habits / Vices: Pacing, Talking to Himself
Achievements: Wrote a symphony and had it performed at a concert hall
Disappointments: Missed an opportunity to get together with someone because he didn’t realise they were flirting with him until years later
Illnesses: Generalised Anxiety Disorder 
Strengths: Steady Hands, Quick Wit, Critical Thinking 
Weaknesses: Low Self Esteem, Non-confrontational, Reclusive
Fears: Letting his guard down and causing those around him to be hurt through negligence
Prejudices: Highly religious people 
 
== Questions ==
Most Painful Experience: Tes had a very nasty fall when he was eleven years old from the top of a two-story building while playing with a childhood friend. He comminuted his right femur, incompletely fractured his right ilium, had a greenstick fracture in his left ulna, and dislocated his left wrist, as well as multiple bruises, scrapes, and cuts. While he was healing, he remembered his family staying close by him. That helped to lessen the intense pain, if only a little.
Best Time: Conducting his own symphony. He was especially fond of that time because his family was there and he knew that they were proud of him.
Most Crucial Experience: Tes got lost in a large crowd in a large metropolis on Andoria and was separated from his parents when he was five years old. Lost and with nowhere to go, he was about to give up when a Vulcan, a Starfleet medical officer on shore leave named Stylkek, calmed him and came with him to find his parents. As they went Stylkek kept talking about his career to young Tes to keep him calm. When they finally reached his parents, Stylkek bade him goodbye and Tes became set on becoming a Starfleet medical officer.
Role Model: Dr Julian Bashir
Referrer / How you found Fed Space (If 'Google' or 'Search Engine' please specify the search engine and the term searched for): Was referred by a friend of a friend who had stumbled across it during an Internet escapade

[Amelina Whittaker]

== Thank you, Cadet. Before we can proceed, I'd like you to repost your bio, as when it's transferred across, there seems to be an issue with the formatting, as the text, etc., is too big and difficult to read (you can have a look at the other bio's that have been posted to get an idea as to how it should look). Also, we'd like you to elaborate a little more on your personal history. At what age did Tes enter the Academy?, What were his classes like? And why did he choose Medicine? , Once that's done, we can continue :-) == 

== Tag Th'etellis ==

[Tes Th’etellis]

== ==Physical Description ==
Name: Tes Th’etellis

Species: Andorian

Gender: Thaan

Age: 24

Height: 6” 6’

Weight: 187

Build/Body Type: Lanky, thin

Complexion: Pocked, Light Blue

Hair Color: Alabaster White

Hair Style: Slicked back, medium length, straight

Eye Color: Steel Blue

Voice: Faltering, somewhat lilted

Off-Duty Clothing Taste: Casual shirt + jeans, occasionally comfortable shapeless dresses

Distinguishing Features: Hooked nose, slightly cleft lip, genetic dark circles around his eyes
 
== Personal History ==
Date of Birth: March 5

Place of Birth: Voral, Andoria 

Marital Status: Single

Siblings Name & Ages: None

Shen Mother's Name: Thyma Sh’etellis

Zhen Mother’s Name: Apittaa Zh’etellis

Chan Father's Name: Ethar Ch’etellis

Thaan Father’s Name: Shrevian Th’etellis 

Parent's Status: Married

Pets: None

Best Friend: Cadet Santtu Uljas, a year below Tes, a Finnish Starfleet communications cadet

Personal History: Tes was born on the continent of Voral on the planet of Andoria to a family of well-known local merchants who had been wanting a child for a long time. His parents were good to him and treated him well, and Tes was often doted on by his Shen mother especially. His childhood did consist of many physical accidents due to him being careless. It caused a massive shift in his demeanor, becoming wary and anxious. When he was about eight years old, his family became aware of his extreme curiosity and his high intellect. Excited by this and wanting their child to be successful, they immediately began planning to get Tes into Starfleet. 

This didn’t upset Tes; he revered Starfleet officers, especially Starfleet doctors. He did his very best to get into the Academy, and his parents, though with the best intentions, pushed him along. Tes burned out fast, and his Shen mother was the first to stop pushing and start helping. The family exhausted nearly every resource they had to help Tes through his burnout. Finally, though tired and exhausted, he got himself into Starfleet Academy at the age of 20. Remembering his many encounters with kind medical staff due to his repeated childhood injuries, his enjoyment of the biology unit during generalised science class, and especially his fond encounter with the Starfleet medical officer Stylkek as a child, Tes found himself gravitating towards the field of medicine.

While at the Academy, Tes mostly kept to himself, but his reserved nature caused him to connect with another cadet: Santtu Uljas. Uljas was severely extroverted and often dragged Tes along with him to social events, introducing him (to Tes’ horror) to everyone there. Tes would begrudgingly participate in these events, though he would often purposely avoid conversations. His classes were tough, and he often found himself falling behind on work and burnt out again. Nevertheless, he always found Uljas by his side, hyping him up and keeping him on the right track. Multi-species medicine was his favourite class, and one he found himself quite good at, not that he wasn’t good at Xenobiology, of course. 

== Personality ==
Academy Majors: Medical

Academy Minors: Multi-species Medicine, Xenobiology

Hobbies & Past-Times: Music Composition, Reading Medical Articles

Short-Term Goals: Finishing his current music piece

Long-Term Goals: Leave a strong, positive legacy and inspire others once he’s dead

Personality: Nervous, reserved, Tes prefers little to no company rather than a large gathering

Sense of Humor: Self-deprecating 

Phobias: Maieusiophobia

Likes: Music, the performing arts, civil conversation (especially with just one or two people)

Dislikes: Large groups of people, heated debate, confrontation

Pet Peeves/Gripes: People with a superiority complex, People who interrupt others

Bad Habits / Vices: Pacing, Talking to Himself

Achievements: Wrote a symphony and had it performed at a concert hall

Disappointments: Missed an opportunity to get together with someone because he didn’t realise they were flirting with him until years later

Illnesses: Generalised Anxiety Disorder 
Strengths: Steady Hands, Quick Wit, Critical Thinking 

Weaknesses: Low Self Esteem, Non-confrontational, Reclusive

Fears: Letting his guard down and causing those around him to be hurt through negligence

Prejudices: Highly religious people 
 
== Questions ==
Most Painful Experience: Tes had a very nasty fall when he was eleven years old from the top of a two-story building while playing with a childhood friend. He comminuted his right femur, incompletely fractured his right ilium, had a greenstick fracture in his left ulna, and dislocated his left wrist, as well as multiple bruises, scrapes, and cuts. While he was healing, he remembered his family staying close by him. That helped to lessen the intense pain, if only a little.

Best Time: Conducting his own symphony. He was especially fond of that time because his family was there and he knew that they were proud of him.

Most Crucial Experience: Tes got lost in a large crowd in a large metropolis on Andoria and was separated from his parents when he was five years old. Lost and with nowhere to go, he was about to give up when a Vulcan, a Starfleet medical officer on shore leave named Stylkek, calmed him and came with him to find his parents. As they went Stylkek kept talking about his career to young Tes to keep him calm. When they finally reached his parents, Stylkek bade him goodbye and Tes became set on becoming a Starfleet medical officer.

Role Model: Dr Julian Bashir, Dr Stylkek

Referrer / How you found Fed Space (If 'Google' or 'Search Engine' please specify the search engine and the term searched for): Was referred by a friend of a friend who had stumbled across it during an Internet escapade

[Amelina Whittaker]

== much better Cadet & thank you for the additions, however, there still seems to be an issue with the formatting. It could be the font used and bold being used;  it's also handy when posting to use the post as plain text when copying it over. So if you could rectify that and resubmit, then we can get you sorted with an Instructor, again have a look at the other bios to see how they've been posted :-) ==