HD05 - Science Cadet Sebastian Cortez
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== Welcome back. The real world is only there to cause us chaos. Things happen. All we can do is smile and carry on.


Good work so far. Just a note, as a human character, you don't really need to worry too much about the telepathic part. This is a catch all assessment, so we have to include it for telepathic characters.

What I would like you to do however, is repost what you already wrote 'in game' again. Specifically noting the areas of text that represent your characters thoughts in Italic text, and emphasis' on key words in Bold text.


I suspect you did do this originally, but when copying and pasting from a word processor program to the board posting reply box, formatting can get lost unfortunately.

If you wrote in the quick reply box below, you can click the Preview Post button, and it takes you to another screen with your preview and a full text editor complete with formatting shortcuts to allow you to double check your formatting, and edit your post before final posting. This might help you a little more as once a post is made, you only really have 15 minutes to edit it before it's set in stone forever.


Once you've done this, we can move on to Lesson 2. ==
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RE: HD05 - Science Cadet Sebastian Cortez - by Theresa Black - 08-20-2025, 04:10 PM

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