08-28-2025, 01:10 PM
==Apologies for the delay! Life has a habit of ambushing people at the worst moment, and unfortunately you seem to have fallen through the cracks.
Overall, this is a fairly good start for your bio. There are things I'd like to see addressed, though.
1) I'd like to see more detail in each of your paragraphs. For example: your character has a best friend, but there's no mention of him. I'd also like to see more about his time at the Academy.
2) It's MACO - Military Assault Command Operations
3) I believe even in the 25th century, the legal drinking age is 21.
4) If your character double-majors, it'll add two years to his Academy training. I would recommend making Security a minor rather than a major.==
Overall, this is a fairly good start for your bio. There are things I'd like to see addressed, though.
1) I'd like to see more detail in each of your paragraphs. For example: your character has a best friend, but there's no mention of him. I'd also like to see more about his time at the Academy.
2) It's MACO - Military Assault Command Operations
3) I believe even in the 25th century, the legal drinking age is 21.
4) If your character double-majors, it'll add two years to his Academy training. I would recommend making Security a minor rather than a major.==