HD06 - Tactical Cadet Michael Brennan

[Amelina Whittaker]

== Great Cadet & well done on answering the questions.  The only thing missing from your post is internal thoughts, just like showing emphasis the use of them is important for this process that we're going through. Another useful tip is when writing as two people in the same post is including your characters name as it allows the reader to know who's involved :-) With that being said I'd like to you redo the post to include internal thought, showing emphasis & add your character’s name then we can move onto lesson 4 ==