09-14-2025, 04:36 PM
== Hello Cadet,
I'll be your bio evaluator for your time in the Academy. You have a well written background and I enjoyed learning more about your character.
One thing I'd like you to change is with your achievements. While you've explained the commendation you received in your bio, remember that it was for a simulation. While your actions would have been praised, a commendation would have been more difficult to receive. Can you please change this in your bio and achievement section? Once done, please post your bio in entirety again here.
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I'll be your bio evaluator for your time in the Academy. You have a well written background and I enjoyed learning more about your character.
One thing I'd like you to change is with your achievements. While you've explained the commendation you received in your bio, remember that it was for a simulation. While your actions would have been praised, a commendation would have been more difficult to receive. Can you please change this in your bio and achievement section? Once done, please post your bio in entirety again here.
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