HD08 - Medical Cadet Kele

[Amelina Whittaker]

== Apologies for the delay, Cadet. I've had a look over your bio, and it's not a bad first attempt :-) Aside from a few formatting issues, where you've put the answers underneath instead of next to the subject/question, we'd like to see more detail in the personal history section. What you have doesn't really tell us about Kele, for instance, what was life like on Feringinar?  Her family, friends, childhood, etc. Also, what happened when she got to the Academy? What was her time there like?, Did she make friends other than the Bolian Cadet? How did she find her classes? That kind of thing, especially since she was there for four years, and you would also need to include graduation. Did anyone from her family show up? 

So, before we can approve your bio and start your lessons, I'd like you to rewrite your bio and rectify the things that have been mentioned, then we can go from there :-) ==