02-14-2026, 12:54 AM
== Hi Cadet!
You did a great job with the questions, thank you! On your writing, you wrote a post that was enjoyable to read, writing what the character was seeing as well as you moved the story forward. The one thing I need to caution you is moving too far. In this situation, you should have two GM requests, one for more information about the tricorder scan and the other if the beam to sick bay was successful.
Can you repost your post again please? No major changes are needed, unless you want to, except don't whisk them away.
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You did a great job with the questions, thank you! On your writing, you wrote a post that was enjoyable to read, writing what the character was seeing as well as you moved the story forward. The one thing I need to caution you is moving too far. In this situation, you should have two GM requests, one for more information about the tricorder scan and the other if the beam to sick bay was successful.
Can you repost your post again please? No major changes are needed, unless you want to, except don't whisk them away.
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