Holodeck 01 - Medical Cadet Khoren Ch'Talan
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== That's okay, we understand when it comes to real life and welcome back :-) I like what you have so far but before we can approve your app,  there doesn't seem to be anything about Khoren's time at the Academy in your personal history so I'd like you to add that in. Also with the formatting so it's a little easier to read I'd like you to put spaces between the paragraphs. Once this is done and you've reposted your app to include the changes requested we can continue :-) ==
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RE: Holodeck 01 - Medical Cadet Khoren Ch'Talan - by Amelina Whittaker - 09-13-2026, 08:30 AM

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