11-07-2024, 05:44 PM
==Apologies for the delay, I needed a second opinion on part of your bio before I made any comments!
Overall this is an excellent Bio, full of rich detail and potential for the future. The only points I really need to make are regarding Hallowette's parents:
1) Relations between the Federation and Cardassian Union are strained right now, but this is not public knowledge. It is entirely possible that the diplomats will be recalled soon, so this is something you as a player need to be prepared for.
2) Hallowette's mother working for Starfleet Intelligence is a nice touch, but in the interests of game fairness, we're going to have to ask that this not provide your character with any inside information into things, special skills, etc.
Aside from that, your Bio is approved. I'll be discussing with the other Academy Admins whether we need to run you through the full training or simply assign you the "Opt-Out" exam and get you to a ship ASAP.==
Overall this is an excellent Bio, full of rich detail and potential for the future. The only points I really need to make are regarding Hallowette's parents:
1) Relations between the Federation and Cardassian Union are strained right now, but this is not public knowledge. It is entirely possible that the diplomats will be recalled soon, so this is something you as a player need to be prepared for.
2) Hallowette's mother working for Starfleet Intelligence is a nice touch, but in the interests of game fairness, we're going to have to ask that this not provide your character with any inside information into things, special skills, etc.
Aside from that, your Bio is approved. I'll be discussing with the other Academy Admins whether we need to run you through the full training or simply assign you the "Opt-Out" exam and get you to a ship ASAP.==