12-21-2024, 05:25 PM
==Good afternoon, I am Commander Carrs and I will be assisting you with the first stage of the Academy process; the development of your character bio.
So far it's a good start, however your Personal History is incredibly short. As we want to get a rich idea of who your character is, we generally look for 3 to 4 good-length paragraphs in this part of the bio. A good rule of thumb in your case would be a paragraph each dedicated to early life, adolescence, and Academy experience.
Please expand upon your character's history, and we can continue.==
So far it's a good start, however your Personal History is incredibly short. As we want to get a rich idea of who your character is, we generally look for 3 to 4 good-length paragraphs in this part of the bio. A good rule of thumb in your case would be a paragraph each dedicated to early life, adolescence, and Academy experience.
Please expand upon your character's history, and we can continue.==