Yesterday, 05:34 PM
==Good afternoon, I am Commander Carrs and I will be assisting you with the first stage of the Academy process; the development of your character bio.
So far, a great start! Well done!
I would like to see a little more about Mika's early life and adolescence described in the Personal History section. Right now it reads like the only defining event of her youth was joining Starfleet and being disowned. I'd like to see what caused her to rebel, be it an event or person, and who or what made her decide to join Starfleet.
Please flesh out your personal history with those details, and we can continue!==
So far, a great start! Well done!
I would like to see a little more about Mika's early life and adolescence described in the Personal History section. Right now it reads like the only defining event of her youth was joining Starfleet and being disowned. I'd like to see what caused her to rebel, be it an event or person, and who or what made her decide to join Starfleet.
Please flesh out your personal history with those details, and we can continue!==