HD01 - Security Cadet Michael Johnson

[Carrs Jasal]

== Welcome to your holodeck Cadet Johnson, 

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== Personal History ==
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== Personality ==
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== Questions ==
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Referrer / How you found Fed Space (If 'Google' or 'Search Engine' please specify the search engine and the term searched for):

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[Michael Johnson]

Sorry haven’t gotten bio up yet been under the weather will get post up in the next couple of days.

[Michael Johnson]

== Physical Description ==
Name: Michael Jason Johnson
Species: Hunan
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Height: 6’1”
Weight: 195
Build/Body Type: athletic
Complexion: Pale
Hair Color: Brown
Hair Style: long straight
Eye Color: Blue
Voice: Deep Confident
Off-Duty Clothing Taste: jeans and a T-Shirt
Distinguishing Features: tattoo on his left arm of a cross and a phoenix with SBJ

== Personal History ==
Date of Birth: October 2
Place of Birth: Chicago IL
Marital Status: Single
Siblings Name & Ages: Steven Blair Johnson 31 (KIA)
Mother's Name: Barbara
Father's Name: Jason
Parent's Status: Alive separated
Pets: None
Best Friend: Shawn Devin
Personal History:
Childhood:
Michael is the youngest of two sons born to Jason and Barbara Johnson, his brother Steven was 10 years older than him. Michael and his brother were raised in a suburb of Chicago his father was an engineer and his mother a doctor, both working for Starfleet.
While growing up his father would take him and Steven camping, he thought them how to survive on their own in the wilderness, how to fish, and hunt. Their father always fought them to only take what they would eat and to respect the planet and the forest where they camped.  When Steven went to the academy he would still come home when he could and go camping and hunting with Michael.
Michael and Steven were inseparable growing up. When Steven graduated from the academy, he left on a mission right after and it was the last time Michael seen his brother. Starfleet informed him and his parents that his ship was attacked by a rogue Romulan Warship. When their father tried to go after the warbird he was forced to resign. 
Jason and Barbara cut ties from Starfleet and forbade Michael from going to the academy. Michael wanting to follow his brother who he always admired joined the academy at 18, against his fathers wishes. He believed that his father cutting ties with Starfleet disgraced his brother's memory
Academy years.
Michael chose to join security over engineering like his father. At the academy he became friends with Shawn Devin. Shawn reminded him a lot of his brother. The two of them had the same classes and worked together to make sure the other passed.
In their second year Michael and Shawn returned to Chicago to see Michael’s mother she had asked him to return home. She told him that her and his father had separated, his father had become a drunk and was spending every night at the local bar.
Michael went to the bar to confront his father about his drinking. They got into an argument over Michael choosing Starfleet after what they allowed to happen to his brother. When Michael attempted to help his father out of the bar Jason took a swing at Michael and gave him a black eye the punch caught Michael unaware and Michael through his father against the wall and started beating him yelling about how he chose to be a drunk then supporting his family when they needed him.
Shawn arrived as the father and son were rolling around the floor and was able to Michael off his father. Reminding him that his father was drunk and his way of mourning. They left the bar. Michael helped his mother pack, and she moved to San Francisco away from his father. He left his father a note that when he sobers up, he would be welcome back in their lives.
During his final years at the academy though his father did not approve of him going to the academy it still bothered him how his father was still crawling inside the bottle to relieve the pain of the loss of his brother.
When Michael was visiting his mother before graduation his father was with her. He had apologized for his drinking and had told them that he was getting help. He told Michael that even though he still disapproved of him joining Starfleet he was proud of the man he grew into and knew that Steven would be proud too.

== Personality ==
Academy Majors: Security Tactics
Academy Minors: Advanced hand to hand combat, Advanced personal weapon design
Hobbies & Past-Times: reading, and relaxing
Short-Term Goals: To become chief of Security for a Starship
Long-Term Goals: To start a family and find out who was involved in his brothers death.
Personality: Sort of a short fuse.
Sense of Humor: Jokes around with those he knows
Phobias: becoming a drunk like his father
Likes: Reading, camping, hunting, and fishing.
Dislikes: Drunks
Pet Peeves/Gripes: People not completing what they start.
Bad Habits / Vices: Quick tempered and loses control
Achievements: Making it to the academy and helping his mother get away from his father
Disappointments: the loss of his brother.
Illnesses: nothing major
Strengths: Outdoor survival, hunting, and tracking
Weaknesses: quick temper can be a loose canon when he gets angry
Fears: Becoming like his father
Prejudices: Romulans blames the whole race for destroying his family

== Questions ==
Most Painful Experience: The loss of his brother, and his family after the fact.
Best Time: Camping with his father and brother
Most Crucial Experience: Beating his father and telling him to stay out of their lives.
Role Model: Steven Watters. Just wants to honor him
Referrer / How you found Fed Space (If 'Google' or 'Search Engine' please specify the search engine and the term searched for): Federation map

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[Carrs Jasal]

==Good evening, Cadet! I am Commander Carrs and I will be assisting you with your bio!

Overall this is an excellent piece of work! I have a few comments to make that I'd like you to address before we move forward, however:

1) I'd like to see something in the Personal History section about Michael's time at the Academy; did he do well? Did he have friends? That kind of thing.
2) I'd like you to carefully go through the Personal History again and correct the spelling and grammatical errors. (I'm not going to point them out on a public thread, if you need help identifying them, please DM me.)

Once those two changes have been made, I can get an Instructor assigned to you and we can get you posting!==