05-17-2025, 11:36 PM
==Good Afternoon, Cadet! I am Commander Carrs (yep, me again!) and I will be assisting in the development of your bio.
Overall, it's a solid start! Though there are some items we need to address before we continue:
1) Which parent contributed the Caitian DNA? There is no mention of any Caitian heritage in the bio.
2) Triangulum Galaxy: On Federation Space, we're still very much exploring the Milky Way. We've expanded exploration into the Delta and Gamma Quadrants somewhat in the last decade, but nothing beyond that. That part of the bio will need to be altered to fit site canon.
Aside from that we're pretty much good to go! Please repost the bio with the changes/clarifications so I can look it over again in one document, and we'll move onto the next stage!==
Overall, it's a solid start! Though there are some items we need to address before we continue:
1) Which parent contributed the Caitian DNA? There is no mention of any Caitian heritage in the bio.
2) Triangulum Galaxy: On Federation Space, we're still very much exploring the Milky Way. We've expanded exploration into the Delta and Gamma Quadrants somewhat in the last decade, but nothing beyond that. That part of the bio will need to be altered to fit site canon.
Aside from that we're pretty much good to go! Please repost the bio with the changes/clarifications so I can look it over again in one document, and we'll move onto the next stage!==